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Welcome to our Eng 100 Blog “Conversation Beyond the Classroom”! The title of this blog refers to the community of active readers & collaborative learners we are creating by sharing our academic writing for Eng 100 with each other + a larger group of students, instructors, academics, and just about anybody who chooses to follow our blog! When you write and post your reader responses here (and, later, as you write your essays for the course), I encourage you to use this audience to conceptualize who you are writing for and, most important, how to communicate your ideas so that this group of academic readers and writers can easily follow your line of thinking. Think about it this way: What do you need to explain and articulate in order for the other bloggers to understand your response to the essays we’ve read in class? What does your audience need to know about those essays and the authors who wrote them? And how can you show your readers, in writing, which ideas you add to these “conversations” that take place in the texts we study?
As students of Eng 100, you will use this blog to begin conversations with other academic writers on campus (students and instructors alike). We become active readers of each other’s writing when we comment on posts here. And, best of all, we are using this space to share ideas! I encourage you to use this blog to further think through the topics and writing strategies you will be introduced to this quarter. As always, be sure to give credit to those people whose ideas you borrow for your own thinking and writing (you should do this in the blog by commenting on their post, but you will also be required to cite what you borrow from your peers/instructors if and when it winds up in your essays. More details on that later…).
Finally, keep in mind that writing to and for this audience is a good way to prepare for the panel of readers (faculty at WCC) who will be reading and assessing your writing portfolio at the end of the quarter. We hope that as a large group of active readers, we can better prepare each other for this experience. But, in the meantime, let’s have fun with it! I am really excited see how far we can take this together!


--Mary Hammerbeck, Instructor of Eng 100

Friday, January 7, 2011

I'm just an Average America

 

I’m a bit at a loss for words to start my blog so I suppose I’ll just start writing and go with the flow. I grew up in a small town in northern California the youngest of six, we were poor but survived. My father worked many hours for little pay and by the time I was twelve I was making money on my  own in the summer mowing lawns, Hauling hay, whatever. I spent a lot of time with my older brother on the dairy milking cows, feeding, and just a lot of hard work. When I was fifteen I got my first tax paying job at Taco Bell I was not only a fry cook but I held the record for eating taco’s in one sitting. I was never a very good student back then I suppose partly because school was boring me to death but in retrospect I realize it was because in a big way I didn’t like being told what to do.
    When I was eighteen I got a job at the lumber mill where my father had been working for some years and as I would perform the monotonous tasks such as tailing off the finger joint machine, pulling chain, and tailing off the Back rip I would look at some of the guys who had been there twenty, thirty years and wonder if my life would be as uneventful as was theirs.
    By age twenty I ended up in Vegas visiting an older sister who was a pit boss at the Sands. When I walked into the place my country bumpkin self was overwhelmed with the lights, the noise, and the men in suits. Everyone looked like someone out of a movie. I took notice of the guys with class the ones in suits who pushed in there chair when they got up from the poker table.
     I had never been to a live show in my life so while I was waiting for my sister to get off work she wrote me a comp (complimentary ticket) to see the show at the Sands, it was Splash, a topless dance number, nothing vulgar, a nice show but topless none the less.
   I never left Vegas, I enrolled into a dealing school called IDS and by the age of twenty one I was dealing blackjack at a dive called Nevada Palace out on Boulder highway. In blogs to follow I will be telling a few more stories about things that happened in Vegas, some may blow your mind. I will continue this course of topic explaining a few events in my life leading right up to today where I will then turn my blogging specifically to the political corruption in the United States of America and what I intend to do about it

1 comment:

  1. You have a fantastic ability to paint your narrative with detail, Bart. Your post offers vivid glimpses of a series of scenes that is your past, your life. The creative writer in me is jazzed! Thanks for sharing, Mary

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